Be a Spark – Poetry Review by Josephs Cloud
Be a Spark is a collection of poems
by a budding poet named Maria. I am very much fascinated by the titles given by
the poet and most of them are inspiring and captivating. As we go through the
poems we find a steady growth of expression from tangible to abstract. Many of
the poems are blessed with beautiful choice of words. It is amazing to find a
budding poet with a rich vocabulary and powerful style of expression. I am glad
to say that poet Maria has some mystical insights into the life, which is
manifested in her words. The Divine is very kind to give the words of wisdom
the poets and the poets are considered to be the instrument of the Divine for
creating a better world. Poets have a great role to play in a destitute time of
the world. I am glad to find a young poet with a spark of life, love and
wisdom. Great insights are communicated in a simple language.
Most of the poems are philosophical
in nature, telling the human beings to be authentic in life by making radical
choices in life. According to Heidegger, human beings are expected to stand out
with an authentic living. A call to an authentic life is found in the words of
Maria. Maria has a beautiful figurative language and her imageries are
fascinating. She is very much comfortable with the poetic devices which occur
naturally in her works. There are some
poems with a mystical experience of the reality where she finds it difficult to
explain as the experience itself is difficult to be communicated. I feel that
this book is worth reading and it will definitely create and ignite a spark
within us reaching the entire humanity.
Here I tried to enter into the spirit
of each works and my thoughts are randomly explained here.
Respect yourself - it tells about the need to love the self, according to Lord Buddha the
self deserves our love more… your words are powerful. There is a need to be
true to the self and Shakespeare said that we cannot cheat the self.
I underestimate myself – it is indeed a write asking the reader to get out of the
narrow walls of underestimation of the self. We have some kind of poor self-esteem
which does not allow us to excel in life. I love the word choice here and the
expression of black hole is perfect. It is something like a crab mentality
operating within us, ever pulling us back when we engage in some creative
activity.
Angel in dark – a lovely poem with a
fine choice of words. Here is a nice imagery and invites the reader to new
horizons on interpretations.
My fake self - A powerful write on
the relation between our inner and outer self. The success in life depends on
the conformity between these two faces. The inner self is given and the outer
self is made and interpreted. This poem asks the reader to be just to the inner
self.
Don’t believe in again – A fine word
choice in the poem gives the feeling of a battle happening within the self. The
mind is a battlefield where numerous battles are fought and lost. That can be
expressed as a volcanic eruption. Indeed a lovely write.
Explore before cursing - limits of
human reasoning that cannot really understand the self. Only possible in a
feeling level where we feel one with other. It tells that we see and interpret
the reality as we are and not as it is. It tells the reader to pause for a while,
reflect and understand the reality before making a comment on something or
somebody. Nice word choice here depicts the emotional crisis within the poet.
Don’t blame me for your mess – it
begins with a number of rhetoric. These questions remaining unanswered and setting
up a platform for the poem. It talks about the importance of the other in
challenging and making us and human beings find fulfillment in mutual
interactions, life is a give and take process. The lovely word choice expressed
the storm within the poet.
The only prayer – a beautiful prayer
of a person before his best friend and Lord. Here God is coming closer to the
person and listens to the promptings of the heart. The poet expresses a deep
trust in the Lord and is sure that God will listen to her and the pains will
fade away. This deep trust enables the poet to look at life in a positive way.
These lines are touching,
We followers don’t get to walk straight we get stuck in the mid pathway we
hold back to see we’re wrong Still don’t correct and it goes lifelong.
To, sensitive failures – A nice write
with a good choice of words. It challenges the life which is engaged in
fruitless battle of criticism. There is a powerful idea that failures are not
mere failures.
See through other’s feel - there is a difference between our
perspective and the reality. It would be better if we get into their shoes. We
often limit the others to the same without understanding and affirming the value
of the other. A nice write with a simple and direct expression.
My gemstone marbles - Here is a nice
imagery and a good choice of words. It is a metaphoric write and the words used
here depict the beauty of life. The poet expressed her desire to reach a world
where there is freedom.
Humiliation is a curse – a nice write
on believing in the potentials of the self. The poet is hopeful and convinced
that our lives depend on the way we think …
I
changed my thoughts and then was glad
We need to offer words of
appreciation to the other rather than thorns of humiliation.
Friend inside is a friend unlike – it
is indeed a nice write with a dance of words and the richness of word power of
the poet is manifested here. It tells about the friend within us, probably the
voice within us, the conscience, and the Divine voice.
Tired of tasks – This is a powerful
write on human life and its various interactions. We have a number of questions
in life, remaining forever. I like these lines very much.
‘Overwhelming fatigue has seized the soul Shrewd spirit can’t even mount
the knoll Distraction and frustration obstruct things done Being spellbound
never assisted anyone.’
Heat the glacier in me – This poem is
a collection of symbolic expressions like glacier, dark angel, boiling blood
and electric shock, which opens up a wide horizon of interpretations. I love
these lines very much.
‘My hopes have returned, fantasy
is just turning the reality to a whole new perspective, it’s up to me to now
fill my hole.’
Show the unseen – Wonderful indeed.
It is about the pilgrimage of the poet to see the unseen. It is possible if and
only if we are ready to think and express with courage. It is filled with the
positive strokes of the poet for the entire humanity to rise above narrow walls
and to be liberated from the clutches of imprisonment.. These lines are
beautiful…
‘Stood
up where she dreamt all life Would be best for her, she might fly high And now
her troubles couldn't let her fall Got her much strong to bring down them all.’
Try living in me - We can exist in
different ways. We may lead an inauthentic and authentic life. It all depends
on the choices we make. We are free to live in a dark cave of ignorance and in an
open space of freedom… I love these lines of the poet, ‘Changing my mind was only just changing my destiny.’
Final stand again – A lovely write on
the nature of human being. Life is not static and we always search for a deeper
meaning and that is the sign of life. At times we may think about the path we have
already covered. We go ahead with the conviction that the fireflies of hope is
always with us.
Let us take that risk – indeed a
powerful write by the poet based on past experiences. We are born and brought
up in a society where we are governed by a set of rules. But we know that those
rules in a way break us rather than making us. But a courageous mind will
always try to transcend the limits given by the society. Here is a touching
part of the poem,
‘ I was fifteen and needed help but nobody noticed my presence Now I
understand it was because I never did anything to prove it And I would rather
walk on the thorns than letting it happen again Oh Father, let me out and reach
those who need my hand in pain.’
Win the start, win it all – Here is a
nice write on the capacity of the mind to make our life. It all depends on our
attitude towards life. The need of
optimism is stressed here. Here is a wonderful line…
‘Following the voice, the start is all it takes; I fly my mind amazed at
my ability to rule its ride.’
The scattered pages – it is a
metaphoric write. We all try to make life meaningful with ever puzzle solving.
Life may scatter our plans on the canvas of the world. Still we struggle to
find a possible shape.
Way of life – It is a nice write on
life and world view. It is composed of a nice imagery and a good choice of
words. There is an interesting and meaningful stanza here,
‘You’ll
always feel contented you’ll always find a road to where your heart calms down after
trouble, this is how it goes.’
Have a go with the unjust – A great
write on the importance of different events and persons in our life and their
role in changing life. The moment of change can appear at any time. There is a
nice choice of words.
You’re gone, that’s it – a nice elegy
here. There is a spontaneous overflow of the feelings of the poet and the poet
opens up the heart to the Divine. It speaks about the deeper relationship
between the poet and the departed. The other is considered to be an angel and a
guiding light.
Colorless shadow – it is a write with
a figurative meaning. Colorless shadow depicts a past that was beautiful and
has no relevance now. We need to forget the colorless shadows of the past to
make life meaningful in the present as we advance to an unknown future.
Life goes on – A nice write with a
sad tone. The word choice creates an imagery which is powerful. It is abstract
in nature.
Goodbye without a goodbye – What a
lovely choice of words! It creates a dark image in the mind of the reader.
Metaphoric expressions in abundance. There is a constant move between abstract
and tangible.
Beyond the clouds – It is more an
abstract expression of the experience of the poet. It offers diverse
possibilities of interpretation. More abstract forms of sense experiences are
depicted here with a lovely choice of words.
Not dead, I am still alive – A great
write with a deep feeling of love. The poet takes the reader to a state of
emotional response, indeed a sad tone. The reader feels one with the characters
here. It is made possible through the use of the right words.
Find my way back to life – it is a
nice write with some spontaneous reflections of the poet in the form of some
questions and statements. It depicts the complex reflection and analysis
happening in the mind of the poet. The style and the word choice are very good.
Do what you do – Great write, indeed
a metaphoric one asking the reader to live life, love life and love what we do.
Short and sweet write.
Garden of nature – Here is a lovely
metaphoric write. The concept of garden of nature is a figurative expression.
It is made visible with a perfect choice of words.
Someone out there- A lovely write
asking us to think about someone out there. It tells about the interdependence
of life. We are connected in a cosmic web. Someone else is shedding blood for
us. I love these lines very much,
‘Have you ever thought someone out there would be losing their life after
a perfect song?’
One true love – Lovely write on real
and eternal love. The poet explains the beauty of the Divine love. The world is
designed in such a way that we turn towards the Supreme Being. There is a nice
imagery here. I love this line very much,
‘Oh God, I wonder how you make your
people turn to you’
Speed to infinity – a lovely write
beyond space and time. It indeed has a mystical touch. Human heart has a
constant tendency to go beyond the limitations of the spacetime continuum.
Short and sweet.
Who said kids don’t make sense? – A
nice write on the wisdom of children. The poet humble looks at the play of
kids. I too feel that children have a lot to teach us. We miss in a way the
childlike innocence and play and build castles and walls of separation and
hate. Children are the same everywhere but the grown up may saw the seeds of
hatred.
Astray we go and go double quick -
This is a poem with a philosophical touch. Life becomes meaningful in making
choices. Repetition adds beauty to the work. I love the way the poet looking at
making choices in life,
‘Choice of two ways it’s natural to pick Astray we go and go double
quick!’
Power of prayer in Rue – A nice write
with a beautiful choice of words, gives the feeling of agony. It is more
abstract and opens up different levels of interpretations.
Exit your little world – A write with
a philosophical notion of worldview. A worldview is an integral part of our
life, it goes on changing. The poet asks us to understand our worldview and to
embrace the worldview of the other.
Night of nights- this write is beautiful
with a nice rhyme scheme and rhythm. There is a spontaneous flow of words. It
takes the reader to a wonderful world of joy.
Three seconds of dawn are gone – It
begins with the expressions of the dreams of the poet to be one with the
nature. The tone is very soft with a selection of soft and beautiful words. A
beautiful imagery is present and it gives something for the reader to ponder
over. I love these lines of the poet,
‘One who’s awake then enjoys every second Breath in and out of this
freshness every moment.’
Modern life denies termination – This
write begins with rhetoric. The poet makes a critique of the modern life where
we take everything for granted and distorts the reality. It asks us to be
grateful to the giver and to be one with the reality.
Promise the world – This is a great
message for the humanity. It talks about love cutting across the geographical
boundaries. The poet asks the people of different color to unite to build a
better world.
Dreams outdoes the use – it begins
with a few negations. The poet speaks about dreams and fulfillment in
abstraction. The choice of words is excellent.
Fog eclipsing the eye of the mind –
it is indeed a nice work on imagination. The poet praises the great gift of
imagination which is activated by the fog. The inner eyes are opened up to the
world of imagination. As Einstein said, Imagination is important than knowledge
which is unlimited. I like these lines of the poet,
‘Fog eclipsing the eye of my mind Allows me to know but a little bit of
truth A little light shining from the future I'm blinded to And that's what
helps me to imagine better too…’
You are always achieving something –
This poem is all about the purpose of life, it begins with a few valid
questions raised by the poet. Our life becomes meaningful when our hands are
extended to the needy. I like these lines of the poet very much,
‘So tell me if you think what you’ve achieved yet? Tell me how many
people are happy of your existence?’
Love that found me – we come to a
mystical level when we are touched with the tips of the wings of the Divine.
The experience of the Divine love transforms us and we speak the language of
love. It is indeed a mystical poem.
Glance deep, feel deep – This write
speaks on beauty and art in an abstract language. It is blessed with a
wonderful choice of words.
Dad’s biggest fan – A lovely write on
the relationship between a father and a child.
It is more going towards an abstract expression blessed with a
figurative language and symbols.
Be a spark – The final poem of the
book tells about the greatest dream of the poet to be a spark in life… In the
words of the poet,
‘Sometimes I wonder if I’d ever get a
remark Remark of the experienced who escaped the dark By the lent of my hand,
an episode of lark And what I want is to “Be” that spark.’
Josephs Cloud
